Module 6 - Poetry by Kids

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Summary:  This collection of poems by Naomi Shihab Nye is very personal.  It is a collection of poems from 100 poets who were children when they wrote the poetry.  Ms. Nye was a writer-in-the-schools in 1974.  This was a position funded by the Texas Commission on the Arts.  According to the poet information on the book Jacket, Ms. Nye has continued in this capacity at least until 2000 when the book was published.  The poems are selections chosen from poems Ms. Nye had collected over the course of 25 years working with students in grades 1 - 12.  There is a very interesting “Forward” and “Afterward” in the book that will interest all who reads the book.  Also very interesting, is the snippets of information found in the Index to the poems.  These snippets containing a look into some of the students and teachers Ms. Nye met during the time she was a writer-in-the-schools.

Quality:  The poems are good quality.  The print is nice and large which will encourage reluctant readers and will be helpful to younger readers.  Unfortunately, there are no illustrations which might cause some students not to read this book.  The vocabulary is easy and references are made to things children are familiar with.  Some of the poems are light hearted while others deal with things we wish children didn’t have to deal with, such as loneliness and a violent household.  The imagery is very vivid in some of these poems.  It is somewhat difficult to gage the quality of these poems because there is no clear indication of the age of the poet.  It would be helpful if the age or grade information was given, in addition to the name of the poet.

Appeal:  The poems are written by children so are in language that will be familiar to children.  Additionally, the subjects they discuss are familiar to children.  For example, poet Jeffrey Trevino writes about things he would like to do, including collecting rocks on Venus (pg. 4).  An additional example is the poem by Rachel Dealy where she describes her “Mimi” as one who never gets mad and smelled of perfume (pg. 72).While the quality of the poems is not that of an older, perhaps professional  poet, many are amazingly complex and thought provoking.  My favorite poem is by Bill Collins and is found on page 66.  It has no title, but is as follows:

When I used to go to the beach

my mother would take a saltshaker

and make the water salty

With great expertise

she would taste, salt, taste

and salt again

five minutes or so

until she decided it was right

Then I would go swimming

thinking my mother

salted the whole ocean

however large it was

I now know

my mother isn’t responsible

for the salty ocean

It takes some of the fun

out of going to the beach

Use:   Often children think they can’t write poetry; that it is too hard. I would use this book as an example to students of how good children’s poetry can really be.  I would use it, along with the information I’ve learned from Georgia Heard’s For the Good of the Earth and Sun: Teaching Poetry to teach children how to see the images of what they are trying to say and write those images down.  I would use the poem “In the Morning” by Mary Gutierrez (p. 64) as a perfect example.  It says, in part:

I wake up

5:30 am

to a silent house

in a silent room

to a silent morning

--- wake up

5:30 am

leave the house

6:20 am

before the yelling

before the screaming

before the pain

Any use for these poems would a to discuss with students how illustrations can add interest to poems.  Students could choose various poems from the book to illustrate.

Finally, this book might be useful to a counselor when dealing with students who are having troubles like those mentioned in the various poems.

References:

Heard, Georgia. 1989. For the good of the earth and sun: teaching poetry. Portsmouth, NH: Heinemann.

Nye, Naomi Shihab. 2000. Salting the Ocean: 100 Poems by Young Poets. Ill. Ashley Bryan. New York: HarperCollins Children’s Books. ISBN: 0-688-16193-6.

Module 6 - Janeczko Collection

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Summary: This is a small book containing 24 poems written by some of the best known contemporary poets.  I say this because many of these authors are the ones I’ve learned about during my course at Texas Woman’s University.  In fact, it was such a thrill to read this book and recognize the names of the poets.  The book has a two page Table of Contents giving the name of each poem, the page number and the poet. Each poem is illustrated in watercolor by Christine Davenier.

Quality: This book has obvious quality when you consider the poets included in the book.  There are poems by Walter Dean Myers, Myra Cohn Livingston, Judity Viorst, Nikki Grimes, Colin McNaughton, Paul B. Janeczko, Naomi Shihab Nye and many more.  The language of the book is well suited for elementary students as well as upper level students.

Appeal: These poems have a humorous quality to them but are not “knee slapping” funny.  Instead they are humorous in the sense that all readers will have been in the situations described in these poems and will smile at the thought of many. There are poems about your worst enemy, about your loneliness, about your dog, and about your best friend.  A small sampling of poems that should have wide appeal.  My favorite is:

To You

By Karla Kuskin

I think I could walk

through the simmering sand

if I held your hand.

I think I could swim

the skin shivering sea

if you would accompany me.

And run on ragged, windy heights,

climb rugged rocks

and walk on air.

I think I could do anything at all,

if you were there.

Use: This would be a great poetry book to read in February when people are celebrating Valentine’s Day.  In an elementary setting, Valentine’s Day is more about friendships than it is about love. A teacher could read this book and have students write a poem to their friend, or alternatively (keeping with the theme of the book), someone who is not much of a friend.  Of course, in writing the negative poems the writer should never mention names.

Additionally, there is a great poem on page 20 by Nikki Grimes, “Summertime Sharing”, that would be perfect for a three person dramatization.  One person would act as Danitra, one person would act as her friend and the third would read the poem while the first two acted it out.  Since this is a poem about summer, it would be good for a presentation to the school at the end of the year.

References:

Janeczko, Paul B., ed. 1999. Very Best (almost) Friends: Poems of Friendship. Ill. Christine Davenier. Cambridge, MA: Candlewick Press. ISBN 0-7686-0475-5.

Module 5 - Poetry for Two Voices

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Summary:  Messing around on the monkey bars is a wonderfully illustrated book of poetry for two voices that elementary children will find very appealing.  It contains a Table of Contents that will be helpful to a teacher wanting to use the book’s poems randomly.  It is easy to find poems that relate to specific topics such as bus rides, new students, lunch money, lost and found, homework and recess. In an introductory note, the author explains how to read the book using two readers.  The different voices are designated by three different typefaces used: one type for the first reader, a second type for the second reader, and a third type for reading in unison. At the back of this book, is a very helpful two page suggestion on “adventurous ways” to read seven specific poems.

Quality: The poems are short and sweet.  They use language that will be easily understood by the intended audience, elementary students.  One wonderful thing about these poems is the use of onomatopoeia.  For example, in the poem, “Whirr, Whirr, Zing, Zap”, the reader finds the words whirr, zing, zap, thud, bonk, boing, grrr, broom, rap and tick-tock.  The rhymes of the poems are natural and not forced. Many of the rhymes are found in the second voice of the poem.  For example:

“New Kid at School”

Where did you come from?

Far away.

Miss your friends?

Every day.

Where do you live?

Maple Street.

What’s your name?

Call me Pete.

How old are you?

Just turned eight.

You like hoops?

Yeah, great.

Got any friends?

Nope, not yet.

Wanna play?

You bet!

Appeal:  These poems will really appeal to elementary school students.  They encourage the participation of the students and present situations students are very familiar with.  Not only can I envision students reading these poems I can foresee them performing the poems much like mini plays.  Students will have so much fun with this book of poetry.  The performance aspect of the poetry is so obvious that teachers will not have to think hard to figure out a way to get students moving and involved with these poems.

Use:  As mentioned above, teachers could just use these poems for performance poetry and the joy that it brings.  “Jenny’s Pencil” would be a perfect starter poem for performance.  It says in part:

Tap, tap

Tap, tap

Tap, tap

Tap, tap

Tap, tap                While we’re reading

Tap, tap                and we’re writing

Student could take turns being the student to physically tap their pencil on the table.  By the end of the poem, all students are tapping their pencil. Other poems such as “Jump Rope Jingle” and “Backboard Rap” could be used in physical education class if you had a P.E. teacher willing to play around with the students using poetry.  The poem,  “Me and Joe Lining Up After Recess”,  which concludes with two children being sent to the back of the line for misbehaving in line, could be used to teach students how to behave correctly in line.  These are only some examples of the many uses that can be made of this book of poems.

References:

Franco, Betsy. 2009. Messing around on the monkey bars and other school poems for two voices. Ill. Jessie Hartland. Somerville, MA: Candlewick Press.



Module 5 - Sidman Poetry

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Summary: This Joyce Sidman book of poetry was written in 2007.  The name alone describes the book: This is just to say: Poems of apology and forgiveness. I must admit the book was a little confusing at first because it states in the Introduction that it is a book of poems written by children of the Florence Scribner School.  The Introduction is written by a student, Anthony K., who describes himself as “editor” and explains how the first part of the book is a collection of poems written by the students wherein the students apologize for various transgressions.  The second part of the book is the responses to those poems from the person to whom they were written.  The Introduction is so convincing that I had to re-examine the title page because I thought perhaps this was a collection of poems put together by Ms. Sidman.  Ultimately I realized that Ms. Sidman was writing these poems as fictional characters. 

Quality:  One is immediately drawn into the life of these students writing the poem.  It is easy to believe they are a group of elementary students who are apologizing for various misdeeds.  The words they use in their apology poems are easy to understand and very “childlike”.  The topics of the poems are very much what school children might be apologizing for.  For example:

This is Just to Say (To Mrs. Garcia in the office; by Thomas)

I have stolen

the jelly doughnuts

that were in

the teachers’ lounge

and which

you were probably

saving for teachers

Forgive me

they were delicious

so sweet

and so gloppy

too bad

the powdered sugar

spilled all over my shirt

and gave me

away

Appeal:  This book will appeal to children of all ages.  It touches upon some funny topics (like the donut stealing mentioned above) but also on some very serious subjects that students deal with.  For example, “Not Really” and “A Waste of Heart” deal with boy-girl relationships.  Actually, these poems are not gender specific, which I think is a positive.  I refer to them as boy-girl relationships because that is a shortened way to describe the content of these poems.  The poems could actually be appealing to students in same sex relationships.  There is also the poem “It Was Quiet” which is about the death of a pet.  The response to this poem, “Losing Einstein” is a touching response from an adult to a child about the feelings of losing a pet.  These would be wonderful poems for a counselor to read to a student during a time of hurt. There are also apology poems and response poems between siblings and the child and parent.

 Use: As mentioned above, I think this book would be a terrific one for a counselor to keep handy.  Many of the poems deal with real life situations and sometimes a short poem showing a student he or she is not alone might be helpful. There is also a “pantoum” poem in this book.  That is a poem where the 2nd and 4th line of the first stanza becomes the 1st and 3rd line of the next stanza.  I had never seen this type of poem and it could be used as an example for students to try this kind of poetry writing.  Here is a short example from the poem:

Spelling Bomb (by Anthony to his mother) - First 3 of 5 stanzas

I can’t believe I lost

I know I disappointed you

Do you really think I don’t care?

I know how important it is to win.

I know I disappointed you;

I saw it in your face when I misspelled.

I know how important it is to win;

I studied hours and hours.

I saw it in your face when I misspelled.

I saw you turn away from me.

Even though I study hours and hours.

I never seem to be your champion.

This book should definitely been in everyone’s collection.

References:

Sidman, Joyce. 2007. This is just to say: Poems of apology and forgiveness. Ill. Pamela Zagarenski. Boston: Houghton Mifflin Company. ISBN: 978-0-618-61680-0

Module #5 - Hopkins Award Winner

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Summary:  This book is the most powerful book I have read this semester. I can certainly see why it won the 2008 Hopkins Award for Poetry, an award given to the most outstanding new book in children’s poetry published the previous calendar year (Vardell Lecture Notes, 2011).  It is a short but succinct free verse poetry book told from the perspective of a ten year old girl who, during 1963, was arrested for marching in a civil rights protest and who witnessed the bombing of the Sixteenth Street Baptist Church in Birmingham, Alabama and the death of four young black girls at the hands of southern racists.

Quality: The book is printed in grayish, sepia tone color.  The photographs included are of life as it existed in 1963.  The photographs are real and there is adequate citation to the photos at the back of the book. There is also an Author’s note that gives historical reference information about the actual events that are depicted in the book. The vocabulary used in the book is easily understandable by children ages 5th grade and above.  I especially like that the author incorporated a memorial, of sorts, to the four girls killed in the bombing. It simply adds to the quality of the book by identifying real people who were part of this horrible event.

Appeal: This book will appeal to anyone who is old enough to understand the circumstances of the Civil Rights movement.  The older and more knowledgeable a reader is about this time in our history, the more appealing this book will be. 

Use: This book begs to be used in the teaching of the Civil Rights movement.  Any social studies teacher should have a copy of this book in his or her room.  This book does not need anything special.  It simply needs to be read, out loud, to students in a voice that reflects the solemnity of the events described within.  An extension activity could be to have students to image themselves living during this time period.  They could write letters to say good-bye to the girls killed in the bombing.  They could write letters to those responsible for the bombing expressing their outrage at the events that occurred.  They could write a letter to the Birmingham newspaper expressing their views.  The options for extended writing are limitless, it seems.  For example, from the following excerpt, students could make a diary entry as if they were a child being kept indoors on the evening of September 15, 1963:

By evening, stoning, shootings, and fires broke out.

Keep our children inside, the police warned.

I wondered if I could ever play outside again.

I prayed myself to sleep that night.

Please protect my family, Lord.

God, give four angels wings.

I do think the use of the book is more limited in the elementary school and would recommend it more for the middle and high school age group.

References:

Vardell, Sylvia. 2011. TWU LS 5663 "Evaluating Poetry" Lecture Notes.

Weatherford, Carole Boston. 2007. Birmingham, 1963. Honesdale, PA: Wordsong. ISBN: 978-1-59078-440-2.

Module 4 - Poetry and Science

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Summary & Quality:  This book of science riddles is one that children will love and teachers will find useful for the introduction of science topics.  It has a Table of Contents in the front and “Notes” in the back.  The Table of Contents simply lists the titles of the riddles and would be much more helpful to teachers if it also listed which topic the poem relates to.  For example, the riddle Buggety Buggety Boo!” is a riddle about germs, not insects.  The “Notes” provide both teachers and students with scientific information about some of the riddles.  For example, “Gee!” is about gravity and the “Notes” gives a definition of gravity.

Appeal: The words are simple and the illustrations are colorful which makes this book appealing to children. Additionally, the illustrations provide visual images of scientific concepts that might be difficult for students to understand.  For example, “Push Me, Pull Me” is a riddle about magnets, describing the pushing and pulling that occurs between magnets and their polar ends.  The pictures are of magnet people, one boy and one girl, who finally come together when they figure out they must attach their opposite poles.

One of my favorites is:

Shhhhhhhhhh!

I am expressible

only by decibel:

10 is a whisper,

30 is crisper,

60, in relation,

Is normal conversation.

80 is traffic and telephones.

120? The Rolling Stones

130 is a cannon Shot!

150 is … what?!

Answer:  Sound

Use:  The riddles in this book are all descriptive poems.  This book would be a good example to students of how to write riddles about scientific topics (or any other topic).  Students could write their own riddles and share them with other students.  Illustrations could also be added to help explain difficult concepts.

References:

Lewis, J. Patrick. 2004. Scien-trickery. Ill. Frank Remkiewicz. Orlando, FL.: Harcourt.

Module 4 - Biographical Poetry

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Summary: This is one of the most amazing books I have read in any of my classes at TWU.  I am so glad I was exposed to this unique piece of literature. I am not alone in thinking it is awesome.  This book was a 2002 Newberry Medal Honor Book and was a 2002 Coretta Scott King Award Honor book.  The book begins to explain Carver’s life when he is an infant (1864) and ends when he is an infirm, old man (1943).  I admit to not knowing much about George W. Carver’s life but this book teaches me a lot.  For example, he had a brother named Jim, he believed in God and reincarnation, his nickname was Doc, and much, much more.

One very helpful aspect of the book is the photographs that often appear at the end of a poem.  These photographs provide a timeline of the events of George W. Carver’s life.  Additionally, they provide information to help clarify a poem which might otherwise not make sense to someone unfamiliar with Mr. Carver’s life.

Quality: The book consists of poems that are free verse, for the most part.  There is not a lot of rhythm or beat to the poems but such is not necessary for the enjoyment of this book.  I assume most of these poems were stand alone poems when originally published but Ms. Nelson has woven the poems together in such a way I have a hard time imagining the poems on their own. All of the poems are of great quality with vocabulary that can be easily understood.  As an overall book, I was very impressed with the poem quality for children from grades 4 and up.  I was, however, disappointed that one particular poem, “Goliath”, was included in the book.  The addition of this poem makes it difficult, if not impossible, to recommend this book to younger children.  This poem vividly describes the lynching of a black man where his penis is cut off and stuffed into his mouth. This creates a mental image that is simply too much for young children, in my opinion.

I wish there had been more information about each of the poems and how the concept of this book came about.  It is hard to determine if this is merely a compilation of poems by Ms. Nelson or if it is a partial compilation with original poems written to “fill in the blanks” to create a full biography. There is a list of poems in the back of the book along with a statement of when various poems were first published.  From this, I can determine that 36 of the 59 poems in the book were previously published.  One would assume that any of the poems not previously published are written by Ms. Nelson but some of the poems indicate that the author might be someone else.  I wish Ms. Nelson had written a preface to the book to explain more about the origin of the poems and which, if any, of the poems are written by her. This would be the one thing that could have made this great book even greater.

Appeal: This book will appeal to students who are reluctant readers in the same way verse novels appeal to these students.  There is a lot of white space so it will appear to students to be easier reading.  It provides a lot of information in a limited amount of words.  It will appeal to teachers because it provides so much more information about George Washington Carver than the typical biography that seems to focus only on his work with peanuts.  This book provides the true picture of the man as well as those around him.  One poem, “My People”, gives the reader a good visual description of George Washington Carver.  It also tells the reader how others felt about him and the prejudice that he must have lived with.  Here is only the first portion of the poem.  It is my favorite in the book.

My People

Strutting around here acting all humble,

when everybody knows

he’s the only one here

got a master’s degree

from a white man’s college.

Everybody knows his salary

is double ours. He’s got two singles

in Rockefeller Hall; the rest of us

bachelors share doubles. The extra room

is for his “collections.”

A pile of you-know-what,

if you ask me.

All that face politeness, that white accent.

He thinks he’s better than us.

Wears those mismatched suits every day, too:

white men’s castoffs with the sleeves too short,

the trousers all bagged out at the knees.

Use: In addition to using this book for a biography report, a teacher could use this book during any units on subjects such as slavery, civil rights, black history month, and famous American scientists.

• An entire class could do choral reading of the entire book with students being given one or two poems each to read aloud.  A class discussion could follow many of these readings.
• Students could follow each reading but placing pins on the map where certain events took place.
• Students could do additional research about various topics mentioned in the poems, such as research into the Ku Klux Klan, Booker T. Washington, Tuskegee Institute, Tuskegee Airment, Chicago’s World Fair, and other things
• It would be a great challenge for high school students to create a book similar.  They could write a book of poems describing their own lives.  They could do interviews with grandparents or other individuals and write a poetry book describing the lives of those individuals.  For the really bright and bold, students could attempt to find other poetry to be woven together to tell the biographical story of some historical figure.

References:

American Library Association. http://www.ala.org/ala/mgrps/rts/emiert/cskbookawards/recipients.cfm (accessed March 18, 2011).

Nelson, Marilyn. 2001.Carver: a life in poems. Ashville, NC: Front Street. ISBN: 1-886910-53-7.